by Smuttyandfun
After reading that I had to give you a 5 stars. It was fun, well paced and very arousing.
What a dirty lil secretary she is. I do hope that Gage has a good supply of little blue tabs, it looks like he may need them soon
One of the nicest stories I've read in a while. I gave you 5 stars. Very well done.
I've given this one four stars, because while it's good as a stroker story, it's missing the characterization that made me add you to my "follow" list. You don't get any real feel for who these people are when they're not in bed (or wherever they have decided to do it) together, and while what there is of the story is technically good, and quite competent, that's all there is to it.
I keep reading this in the voice of Dennis the boss on the it crowd and it ruined it for me XD
I couldn't finish the first Page. Something about "in all his naked his glory" (or something like that), & then "I couldn't take my off him". I wouldn't submit something with BOTH of those mistakes to a site at all, let alone a contest!!!