All Comments on 'Caught in the Crossfire Ch. 02'

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MasterfuljimMasterfuljimover 9 years ago
It's good

I like a realistic blackmail and revenge story and this fits the bill nicely.

verbicideverbicideover 7 years ago
Still loving it

I'm finding myself sympathizing with Brittany a little bit more. The men in her life are awful. Two dirty cops, one miserable punk and a loathsome blackmailer. Still, I'm fascinated to see where this is going though it would be awesome if by the end, Santos, Jack and all these bastards got their comeuppance. I suspect that won't be the case though.

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Reading between the lines - it is the curse of every writer and the duty of every reader. Erotica without porn is just tawdry fiction. Porn without erotica is just boring. My reaction to porn films is as follows: after the first ten minutes, I want to go home and screw. Afte...