All Comments on 'Caught in the Crossfire Ch. 05'

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bearsladybearsladyover 9 years ago

And another layer added. Well done

LeFrog08LeFrog08over 9 years ago
Nice to see Jack is human after all.

I wonder how Britt & Jack's liaison will evolve. I'm also wondering how Jack will finally bring Santos down...

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Definitely a "Best of Class" story....

....from the first line to the last period, this one is a "keeper"!

Very, very well written, a great storyline and very well edited........what's not to like?

I, for one, look forward to the next episode.

Geez! This one is better than the last novel I read! 5*, 'cause the don't do 10.

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Reading between the lines - it is the curse of every writer and the duty of every reader. Erotica without porn is just tawdry fiction. Porn without erotica is just boring. My reaction to porn films is as follows: after the first ten minutes, I want to go home and screw. Afte...