All Comments on 'Caught in the Crossfire Ch. 10'

by dresbach

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bearsladybearsladyover 9 years ago

You did it....I was so hoping Jack's plan would go off without a hitch and Brittany wouldn't get the crap kicked out of her by Santos.....but you did it......well hell. The only way this will be okay with me now, is if Santos dies a very slow and extremely painful death. :-D

joyrydsjoyrydsover 9 years ago
Great story

Please have Jack save Brit. The character and story development has been fun and I can't wait for the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Twists and turns.....

.....ya gotta love Santo's version of insanity....

Like others, I hope Jack (or someone he's contacted) comes to the rescue....before it's too late.

'Cause he kept telling everyone he was a nice guy.....well, I guess we'll see. Too short, this climactic episode.

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