All Comments on 'Caught in the Shower Ch. 02'

Loved it!! Please continue.

Please don't leave your faithful readers hanging like this. This story is incredably sexy and your descriptions are simply out of this world. Please send me a copy of the next chapter as soon as you can. PLEASE!!!!!!!!

Very good job on this one, mzzqt. Father/daughter incest stories on Literotica are usually stupid and cliched but this one was really good. Loved the scene where you described dad getting hit by a small tornado as he walked in the door. It made me think of Summer, one of my favorite women from one of my own stories. That "small tornado" that hits someone is exactly how she is too. (I hope you won't be offended if I borrow that line at some point!) That whole scene you wrote was just great narrative, especially when she leapt up into dad's arms and dad's hands discovered bare ass beneath her nightshirt.<p>

Excellent descriptions, and you created such a lovable and desirable girl.

ya did it again.very hot indeed as always.an

like every one else I'm waiting fer ya next chap

The way it was written was great.. Slow build up..

Tense. Not tension; tense. First, then third, then first again, but a different person. Then eventually third again. All in the same story. Sometimes in the same paragraph. Writers, please remember your junior-high school English. Maybe this will get an edit?