by RSchwuler
Part 3 should start with his return to the gym, even though he knows he will be publicly outed to everyone he knows.
Awesome as always.
I think a little part of him may have just fallen in love. It'd be hard not to when you've been so thoroughly owned. No way he won't be back there to serve the man that made him who he is.
I hope there is a part three, possibly with an unknown witness who has video of his deflowering, and he is owned by a man - long-term.
I agree with @thetomtom, the whole shaving sequence was mesmerizing. Sometimes it's easy when reading (or writing) porn to race through the "foreplay" to get to the majestic main events of penetration and insemination; but I found myself pausing and re-reading each paragraph of that scene ... the way you captured the main character's mindset as he surrendered to his emasculation ... wishing it was happening to me ...
Of course, the eventual and inevitable deflowering was masterful and powerful as always.
Such a wonderful tale, and so well-written! I’ll be jerking off to this very soon…
A sequel is needed, the culmination of which would be with our older bull hero fucking little spanky in front of his father or...emasculating and power fucking spanky's father in front of him. Turning the both out with colon's full of jizz.
Amazing story. You’re a brilliant writer! Such awesomely naughty and kinky fantasies, please write more
You need to take the next step in story development, and have spanky exposed to others in his social circle, leading to further humiliation and submission to others. The storyline begs for "the next step seemingly into the abyss"... but perhaps just karma and happiness for all....
So totally hot..all cleanly shaven so he’s left like a woman….the way he should look since he has a clit for a cock…everything about this is white hot…
We need a new chapter!
This hypnotube video has some interesting story ideas?
https://hypnotube.com/video/dirty-old-daddies-by-drogon-46180.html