All Comments on 'Cavendish's Enlightenment'

Just yuck..

Perhaps too well written for your critics.

She slapped him and he slugged her, knocking her out cold. He picked up a cane and knocked another woman out and then headed for the door. What were the other women going to do? Try and tackle him? Not likely.

Not realistic of course. The first caning would have put him in the hospital...perhaps

resulted in being wheel chair bound. And the ladies doing substantial jail time etc.

Aggravated asault is not amusing. But well written...him enjoying the procedure was nice good touch.