All Comments on 'Cécile's Calling'

by Serafina1210

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SplendidSpunkSplendidSpunkabout 10 years ago
Dirty Good

I hate to say I liked this but I got to be honest. Write some more, you have to have more shit to put out!

sandymonroesandymonroeabout 10 years ago

It was a bit too hardcore but you definitely know how to build tension. I would love to read more from you.

tonguelasher01tonguelasher01about 10 years ago
Thank you, please continue.

It would be nice if you ventured into a little more hard core stuff. They should make her drink their piss, and maybe whip her tits, cunt, and asshole directly with a crop or cane. Tie her up and whip her, like on the soles of her feet and so on. The kinkier the better. But very nice job so far.

Serafina1210Serafina1210about 10 years agoAuthor

Thanks to all for the encouragement. I've still got lots to learn about putting a story together, but I think I'm making progress.

Tonguelasher: Give Cécile a little time: she's just starting her career. I promise her adventures are going to get more painful!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Amazing

What a dirty, nasty, whore. A masterwork of filth.

Serafina1210Serafina1210almost 10 years agoAuthor
Puzzled

I've been scratching my head for three weeks trying to figure out if that last comment is positive or negative. Never mind, it's all good.

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