by Serafina1210
I hate to say I liked this but I got to be honest. Write some more, you have to have more shit to put out!
It was a bit too hardcore but you definitely know how to build tension. I would love to read more from you.
It would be nice if you ventured into a little more hard core stuff. They should make her drink their piss, and maybe whip her tits, cunt, and asshole directly with a crop or cane. Tie her up and whip her, like on the soles of her feet and so on. The kinkier the better. But very nice job so far.
Thanks to all for the encouragement. I've still got lots to learn about putting a story together, but I think I'm making progress.
Tonguelasher: Give Cécile a little time: she's just starting her career. I promise her adventures are going to get more painful!
I've been scratching my head for three weeks trying to figure out if that last comment is positive or negative. Never mind, it's all good.