All Comments on 'Centaurs, Hu-cows and Foxes, Oh My!'

by sethp

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
You did it again

Bro! You did it again! This story is so hot, I almost had a stroke reading it! Thank you sir!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
GREAT START !

You have a great story line/world. It could lead our main characters to additional adventures and other characters kidnapped and brought to this world

please continue the tale/stories

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
That was great.

I think this is a great story. You only had a few mishaps. All in all five stars. And please continue with these kind of stories.

chipmonk9chipmonk9almost 4 years ago
Hope for more

I really injoyed this story hope you write a sequel or create an expanded universe from this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Sequel

This so needs a sequel!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Keep it going!!!!

Like this story and hope there is more to it!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Great story

I honestly respect fantasy world magical abduction stories that just say "fuck it, MAGIC AND SHIT" than some ham-fisted attempt at creating an alternate timeline modern slavery system with a billion flaws that never get addressed. At least this story is logically consistent and doesn't have any gaping plotholes. Only gaping holes.

DanatothKasaDanatothKasaover 2 years ago

Love it! A sequel would be great. Really enjoy the characters & world.

SatyrDickSatyrDickalmost 2 years ago

Fun und Romantique!

11/10!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Part two, when?

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I would like to see this as a novel

Writer2000Writer20005 months ago

Very interesting and erotic storyline but you need an editor. You make lots of basic grammatical errors that spoil it for other writers who are fussy about grammar. 4 stars.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Good story, but the end felt rushed.

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