All Comments on 'Challenge 04 - Monica at Carnival'

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notreallife13notreallife134 months ago

This story has the most potential for you in my opinion. How she manages her intelligence, her competitiveness, her desire to please, her relationship with Harley, how far she goes with Cassius or - even maybe hints of full on porn with Julius. George was training her for the rough men before ...

Can't wait for her to get implants and see how big she goes. Appreciate this effort and can't wait for more.

Amiable69Amiable694 months ago

Excellent! Amy x

Dee_PurpleDee_Purple4 months ago

This was a pleasurable read to wake up to. I always love having a nice hot story to read while my husband is sleeping cluelessly next to me in bed. Love the story's evolution!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Very good. Darker and deeper please.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Please postpone the rest of your stories and just keep on with this one!

alexetlaurealexetlaure4 months ago

5 stars ! Plenty of promises for the next chapters

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Challenge 6 has been re-submitted (I did another edit) and should be published sometime this week. I am working on Challenge 7. Thanks for your support and comments. If you enjoy a story don't forget to give it a nice score (like a *5* for example) to help others find it. ...