by AutumnWriter
AW,
It's coming together now. This is overall a very good story. I do hope Federal fraud charges are coming against Hopkins and company. A little time in the crossbar hotel would be very appropriate.
So well done and has me avidly waiting for the next chapter.
Thank you
PT
is one of the most enthralling stories that I have ever read.If it was a TV series it would get top ratings.
Well AutumnWriter, this chapter gave us a somewhat different Paul, one more human and, dare I say, less arrogant. You tied up a few loose ends and moved the story on quite efficiently. Personally, I don’t think that either Paul or Raines could, or would, have come to such an agreement (at the airport) since there are serious ethical questions involved and ethics seem to mean so much to Paul! Pete.
AutumnWriter weaves his magic once again in this Ch. 08. Plunging us into the business world inhabited by his characters we, through his immense literary skills are allowed to come along, seeing, feeling the emotions his characters experience. Yet another chapter in this most interesting on-going story.
its always the little guys who solve the major problems. TK U MLJ LV NV