All Comments on 'Chance Encounter Ch. 08'

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DesertPirateDesertPiratealmost 18 years ago
Better

AW,

It's coming together now. This is overall a very good story. I do hope Federal fraud charges are coming against Hopkins and company. A little time in the crossbar hotel would be very appropriate.

peggytwittypeggytwittyalmost 18 years ago
Just a great small novel.

So well done and has me avidly waiting for the next chapter.

Thank you

PT

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
This

is one of the most enthralling stories that I have ever read.If it was a TV series it would get top ratings.

PEATBOGPEATBOGalmost 18 years ago
Much better!!!!

Well AutumnWriter, this chapter gave us a somewhat different Paul, one more human and, dare I say, less arrogant. You tied up a few loose ends and moved the story on quite efficiently. Personally, I don’t think that either Paul or Raines could, or would, have come to such an agreement (at the airport) since there are serious ethical questions involved and ethics seem to mean so much to Paul! Pete.

duddle146duddle146almost 18 years ago
Wonderful Read!

AutumnWriter weaves his magic once again in this Ch. 08. Plunging us into the business world inhabited by his characters we, through his immense literary skills are allowed to come along, seeing, feeling the emotions his characters experience. Yet another chapter in this most interesting on-going story.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
AND IN THE ENDING

its always the little guys who solve the major problems. TK U MLJ LV NV

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