by Moondrift
Those 2 sentences made me laugh. Very nice story.
I was trying to place the city. First I thought of Sydney. Then you mentioned a river and gardens surrounding the CBD. Adelaide. It's great to read a story set in Oz. Even better as it was a sweet story. Thank you.
NO WOMAN EVER SAYS THIS...Shortly she began to gasp, “No Malcolm, no…don’t make me come…please…please don’t make me…
I really enjoyed your story, I gave it the highest rating in spite of my disappoinment with the ending. Thank you!
Your endings are soooo frustrating sometimes, I thought it may have been me but I'm glad other readers think the same. Still I gave you a lucky 5 stars for this.
would have liked to have seen the guys who raped her taken care of and either prosecuted or beaten...a vile crime....otherwise a good tale....
I don’t know if Moondrift reads the comments or even if he is even still alive. I will comment however, that his romances often feature unintended pregnancies, damaged characters and the most sudden and terse conclusions imaginable. After reading several, they all seem to fuse together and become an amorphous blob of similarity. Sorry.