by magmaman
It's never too late to try to undo the damage done to a relationship. Too often, the damage can't be undone, but in storyland we can always try for a happy ending.
BRAVO and thank you!
A sweet story about people finding each other. No major screw ups worse than being dense. No recriminations about what she was doing while gone. What a nice little story. Well Done!
Just a lovely, sweet story. Had enough dark lately, this was great. THanks
A couple of people who are afraid to speak their feelings finaly get the heads on straight. Light and damn near cheerful after some of the stories we have seen lately. Very well done!
It's not great literature, but it is a cute, heartwarming story about a lost girl and a dense but nice guy. Thanks. Nice to read something that is cheerful,
the Ct. Yankee
Good story. Enjoyed the ending. Sometimes life does turn out alright. Keep up the good work.
Oh what a lovely surprise. This story brought tears to my eyes. YOU are a writer, thank you for the read. Really. You just made my day. If I could give you a higher rating I would.
I seldom write comments to stories. When I do they have to be moving. This story moved me to tears as I became a part of it. Only a story so well told that it draws the reader into it wins comments from me.Just awesome.
Thank you, author, for a most excellent little tale. I considered 'Thank you, Magmaman' but that sounds too much like a line out of some super-hero comic book and I didn't want to detract from the heroes in your story.
Made me teary.You proved it's not always have 2 B sex 2 write in LITEROTICA.Job well done.
An excellent story about a loving relationship that creeps up from nowwhere and bites him in the ass. As one of the participants in such a story that involved a young soldier and a Wren that has now lasted 52 years, thank you for a genuine erotic romance
I just discovered this little gem - wonderful.
You have so much variety in your different stories and I think you are truly talented.
Thank you,
Norman D
Question Why do you talented writers have to always kill off the old folks?lol. Thanks for the little escape this story has given me
I do have a life it's just I come across this story now and again and just can't resist rereading it again
A sweet story magmaman. Glad Dan got his head out of his ass.
Thank you!
Well written, fine characterization, VERY nice ending for such a short tale! Please write more, you have a gift!. Dan
in truth there was almost no story in this story.
This seemed overly simplistic, but for some reason I liked it. It won't win you any Nobel prize, but it made me feel good anyway.
You obviously put this together in a hurry. You could spend more time on the character development. Joyce working as a dancer/stripper didn't contribute positively to this story. At any rate, it was a nice read.
WOW! This is a Wonderful story of true love! The ending was a little too quick in my opinion. Other than that it was FANTASTIC! ......Love you all! Bye. Greg. Oh 10 stars = 100 % Bye.
Great little story. Too often in life our dream is right there with us and we don't recognize it.
Most of the times you need to allow it. Hopefully they will return that love. I will always lead with my heart over my mind. Always with devastating results. 5 good story.
Nice story, even if there wasn't any sex, lol. Dan almost fucked up when he let Joy go, but it turned out well.