All Comments on 'Chance Meeting'

by magmaman

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AgenaAgenaabout 17 years ago
Great Story

Good plot, well written.

gatorhermitgatorhermitabout 17 years ago
Strange little story

Bittersweet... but very thought provoking.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Never Too Late

It's never too late to try to undo the damage done to a relationship. Too often, the damage can't be undone, but in storyland we can always try for a happy ending.

BRAVO and thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
I'm confused?

A sweet story about people finding each other. No major screw ups worse than being dense. No recriminations about what she was doing while gone. What a nice little story. Well Done!

d70photogd70photogabout 17 years ago
Lovely!

Just a lovely, sweet story. Had enough dark lately, this was great. THanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Ditto

OK, I'll say it again. Ditto

DesertPirateDesertPirateabout 17 years ago
Nice touch!

A couple of people who are afraid to speak their feelings finaly get the heads on straight. Light and damn near cheerful after some of the stories we have seen lately. Very well done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Nice warm story

It's not great literature, but it is a cute, heartwarming story about a lost girl and a dense but nice guy. Thanks. Nice to read something that is cheerful,

the Ct. Yankee

Alvaron53Alvaron53about 17 years ago
Enjoyed the tale

Thanks for a nice read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Good story

Good story. Enjoyed the ending. Sometimes life does turn out alright. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
How Sweet!

I Love A Happy Ending!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Oh

Oh what a lovely surprise. This story brought tears to my eyes. YOU are a writer, thank you for the read. Really. You just made my day. If I could give you a higher rating I would.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Just awesome.

I seldom write comments to stories. When I do they have to be moving. This story moved me to tears as I became a part of it. Only a story so well told that it draws the reader into it wins comments from me.Just awesome.

studebakerhawkstudebakerhawkabout 16 years ago
Really just one thing left to say

Thank you, author, for a most excellent little tale. I considered 'Thank you, Magmaman' but that sounds too much like a line out of some super-hero comic book and I didn't want to detract from the heroes in your story.

Redwan666Redwan666almost 16 years ago
great writing!

Made me teary.You proved it's not always have 2 B sex 2 write in LITEROTICA.Job well done.

bruce22bruce22over 15 years ago
Nicely done

Pleasant light romance. It make me feel good!

MoogPlayerMoogPlayeralmost 15 years ago
Excellent

What a great story!

northlandernorthlanderover 14 years ago
An Excellent Story

An excellent story about a loving relationship that creeps up from nowwhere and bites him in the ass. As one of the participants in such a story that involved a young soldier and a Wren that has now lasted 52 years, thank you for a genuine erotic romance

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
An excellent story

I just discovered this little gem - wonderful.

You have so much variety in your different stories and I think you are truly talented.

Thank you,

Norman D

RePhilRePhilover 13 years ago
GREAT READ

Question Why do you talented writers have to always kill off the old folks?lol. Thanks for the little escape this story has given me

RePhilRePhilabout 13 years ago
Yeh back again

I do have a life it's just I come across this story now and again and just can't resist rereading it again

Mostera1Mostera1over 12 years ago
I am so glad this popped up on random.

A sweet story magmaman. Glad Dan got his head out of his ass.

Thank you!

phd70phd70over 11 years ago
Great Story!

Well written, fine characterization, VERY nice ending for such a short tale! Please write more, you have a gift!. Dan

rightbankrightbankabout 10 years ago
At the beginning you said there was almost no sex in this story

in truth there was almost no story in this story.

HansTrimbleHansTrimbleabout 10 years ago
Sort of strange

This seemed overly simplistic, but for some reason I liked it. It won't win you any Nobel prize, but it made me feel good anyway.

phil2213phil2213about 10 years ago
I have no idea but I really really liked this.

You obviously put this together in a hurry. You could spend more time on the character development. Joyce working as a dancer/stripper didn't contribute positively to this story. At any rate, it was a nice read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
YOU KNOW I LIKED IT

WOW! This is a Wonderful story of true love! The ending was a little too quick in my opinion. Other than that it was FANTASTIC! ......Love you all! Bye. Greg. Oh 10 stars = 100 % Bye.

fisheronefisheroneover 6 years ago
Love comes unexpected

It shows love comes when and how it wants.

linnearlinnearalmost 5 years ago
Nice Story

Entertaining little story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Beautiful story

Sure sneaks up on a person.

Rancher46Rancher46over 3 years ago

Great Story enjoyed the read. just love those happily ever after.

jimjam69jimjam69over 3 years ago

Great little story. Too often in life our dream is right there with us and we don't recognize it.

cybojicybojiover 3 years ago
To truley love someone

Most of the times you need to allow it. Hopefully they will return that love. I will always lead with my heart over my mind. Always with devastating results. 5 good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Cute 5/5 Romance

oldpantythiefoldpantythief12 months ago

Nice story, even if there wasn't any sex, lol. Dan almost fucked up when he let Joy go, but it turned out well.

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