All Comments on 'Chance Meeting'

Your writing style is so tedious. All these short sentences. Join some together so that the story flows. As it is, it's like listening to a car engine stuttering to start.

And curiosity is 'piqued', not 'peaked'!

It had a very good basis, keep writing.

Don't allow shitty comments to make you lose your passion.

And it shows how uncertain people can be in a lesbian relationship, just as in a straight one. I had one story with a lesbian relationship where a reader faulted me because they two women didn't sleep together on the first date.

The story was very good, even if your grammar isn't perfect. Keep at it.

I loved your story and I like your writing style. It made it easy to read. Sure you made a couple of typos but we’re all human and it happens. Perhaps get a friend to proof read your stories before you post them?

Story development keep my interest. Story was done well and not predictable. Thanks

wonderful story, totally enjoyed reading it, very well done

but I'd still like to watch

I really enjoyed this story, not too short, not overly long, but just long enough for you to build the characters and the romance. Thank you for sharing this with us!

What a lovely story! Thank you so much for sharing.

A lovely simple story but sexy, I really enjoyed it. Thank you

Keep it up...

On your fascinating and sexy writing. I feel your lead-ins to your stories provide the perfect setups for the ensuing outcomes. All so sexy and so very believable.

Although you were "experienced", this really felt like it was the first time for both of you. A sweet love story masquerading as a sex story.

And, umm, doing quite well as a sex story too....

The story very sexy beautifully written when is the next installment please very enjoyable reading. xx

Great story. Builds nicely and ends hot. Please more.

Thoughtfully written in a fashion that can be both intimate and generalizable to readers.

Nice story on the discovery of love in such a tender way...

I liked it. It was teasing, and then she gets together with Lisa, and sex finally happens. It was just at the right pace.

I very much enjoyed this, the first and so far only story of yours that I've read. Trust me, I will be back for more!

I love the leisurely pace with which you develop the relationship emotionally as well as sexually.

I look forward to reading more of your work.

Thank you,

Sarahxxxxx

Wow that was so tedious. By the time it got to any sex, I was too bored to keep reading.

Very good story

Well done. Thanks

A lovely "getting to know you" story.