All Comments on 'Change of Life Ch. 10'

MANDY RULES BOTH HOUSEHOLD OR SHE WILL SOON.

Ok, I loved the writing, the buildup, and the sex scenes description. However, Mandy's comments during the late stages of the girl on girl scene do touch of the same concerns that Bud had at the time. Namely it sounds like Mandy's a dominant gradually establishing Shirley as her sub, as Paul appears to now be.

Which means Bud's marriage is in as much trouble as ever, only from another direction, going from infrequent sex to having his now sexually aroused (and newly discovered submissive) wife taken away by Mandy.

MANDY IS CONTROLING BUD WIFE,BUD NEEDS TO STOP THAT FOR HIM AND WIFE TO BE HAPPY.

Aren't you something - a new direction - good show - erotic - edgy - non-predictable - interestingly different!!! Quality of word choices also much improved. Proof reader helps eh!!

Please don't slip into the old theme - you are going to be one of the best if this keeps up!!!

Thanks for your time, effort and talents - best Regards

I wouldn't just get away from their house I would move out of the area and get the wife into "counseling". She is mentally a sex slave. No way I would want MY wife.

Look at you A story with a new twist. I enjoy the way this story had gone so far. You writting has improved and you story line is as good as ever. From being a long time fan and reading all your work, I am sure you won't let Mandy take control of Bud and Shirl like she has paul. He has become a complete submissive bending to her will. I see some major problems for the foursome in the future can't wait for the next chapter.

Look at you A story with a new twist. I enjoy the way this story had gone so far. You writting has improved and you story line is as good as ever. From being a long time fan and reading all your work, I am sure you won't let Mandy take control of Bud and Shirl like she has paul. He has become a complete submissive bending to her will. I see some major problems for the foursome in the future can't wait for the next chapter.

I would be very concerned about Mandy. She is a dominant sexual beast, and if Bud doesn't do anything about it, he will become her sex slave also.....LOL!!!!

The story just got very interesting.

Cheers!!

So, true colors begin to show! Mandy is a narcissistic nymphomaniac dominatrix. Paul is a total sub, and has been for years, likely. Shirl is very submissive, a discovery that Mandy is using for her own benefit. It will not be healthy for Shril, however. And Bud, well, Mandy has used Shirl’s submissiveness to hone in on him, her real target. Will Bud be strong enough to save him and his wife from the clutches of the evil Amanda?