All Comments on 'Changes'

WOW! and more.....

Wonderful story!! Would love to see several more chapters!

This story was so poorly written I got turned off reading it. Work on your writing skills.

first of all... i will post my email at the bottom due to the fact that i am forced to be anonymous... your characters have no feeling. there was no emotion or build up to add suspence to what they were doing. i had to stop reading it because just when i thought there was going to be some build up BAM they are ALL OF A SUDDEN all into each other. i feel there could have been some hesitation to play off of that would have made this a more pleasurable read. perhaps a little background history of the dad and daughter. just seemed like there was ALOT missing that would have kept me intrested. sorry

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The only better thing would have been him impregnating her and living as husband and wife!!!

Pretty good!! A few oddities though.. He has sex gel, but no condoms in the night stand? Hehe... And she wears baggy clothes, never dates and never goes out but she's a deep throat blowjob queen?! Rofl!!

...and Ive never gone from one finger then straight to pushing my cock in a virgin ass and had her yell 'YES YES!!' Lol!

That fun aside, it was enjoyable!