All Comments on 'Changing a Lightbulb'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Cute....🙄

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Wham, bam, thank you ma'am.

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsabout 2 years ago

This could have been a good story with a little to a lot more effort. Develop the teases Suzy dd some more, before the action. Make Suzy debate more seriously what they were doing, and finally, develop some of the dialog between the sisters. 4* ~~JB

B1GDeeB1GDeeabout 1 year ago

If only it was that easy lol!

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