All Comments on 'Chapstick'

Wonderful start. You need to continue with this story. What happens next?

Awesome so far. Keep writing!!! Can't wait to read more of your stories. ;-)

Yours is a nice, simple first-time story, nothing complicated, with a realistic description of how two inexperienced girls would explore and bring each other pleasure. Good going!

...there's one thing I have to comment on. Kris has stuck her hand into Marcy's panties and masturbated her to climax. Then she has to summon up the courage to touch Marcy's breast? Come on, don't you think it would be more plausible the other way around? That moan apart, this is an enjoyable first chapter.

Loved it.