All Comments on 'Charitable Spirit-Respecting Elders'

by watchingyou2

Sort by:
  • 5 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Seemed to be

Another weak man story, stopped reding.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Best

Well done in all areas. Do continue with this story line. Definitely your best work yet and thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Awesome

God I love this story keep it up!!!

currentoccupantcurrentoccupantalmost 8 years ago
A thousand stars!

Mercy! This is a spectacularly hot story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Close to good, but

Clever premise with great possibilities but it turns into rape with wildly fantastic understanding of women's sexuality. Make her older and put more give and take in the seduction phase.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous