All Comments on 'Charity Begins at Home Ch. 02'

Well written, intense and obviously well thought out. I do hope this one continues. I'll be waiting to see how sister Sarah deals with this "turn of events". And sharing cock with Mom.

A good story without being overly contrived and well-written. A rarity on this site.

finish and bring all three together maybe sis can get pregers

you only get a 25/100 because this is far from finished and writers on this site have a bad habit of notfinishing the stories they post if you finish it soon and do it well you will get a better grade if not a lower one finish soon

DBRS

still no second chapter so i will reduce my rating from 25 to 10. SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND SOME RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND FINISH WHAT YOU STARTED OR REMOVE ALL YOUR STORIES IT IS NEVER ACCEPTABLE TO LEAVE A STORY UNFINISHED SO GET BUSY OR START ERASING

That is some damn good writing please keep it going

Scooter's a very lucky boy. Not only is his sis's sweet little slit open to his big fat prick whenever he feels like plugging it, now his own mother loves her boy's big prick and wants him to unload his young balls up her mommy-hole all the time. But no need for old Scoot to ration his semen. The boy's got plenty of creamy sperm in his balls for both of the family cunts. Lucky young motherfucker--oh, and sisterhumper too!

Both parts of this story are well-crafted and well written. Very exciting sex scenes.

Please: if the story continues, DON'T make it a threesome. Schedule Scooter to work with both Sis and Mom apart from each other. Lezzie sex is a big turn-off (for me---there's a separate site for that here.) Sounds kinda strange to say "keep it clean" when it's incest at stake, but both of these women deserve their own stories with Scooter.

Good job but could use a few more chapters.I'll say same as always nock them up.

What a great story, Really hits close to home, not with Mom but sis was smoking hot and managed to extract a lot of loads from me over a two year period. I loved your story

ANOTHER UNFINISHED STORY. I GUESS AFTER THIS STORY AND TEN YEARS LATER, THE AUTHOR DISAPPEARED AND LEFT US HANGING. WELL, I GUESS YOU COULD SORT OF END IT LIKE THIS, BUT WITH SO MANY UNANSWERED QUESTIONS, THE POSSIBILITIES ARE MANY. SO HERE WE SIT, SCRATCHING OUR HEADS. THIS HAPPENS ALOT ON THIS SITE. ALOT OF INCOMPLETE STORIES HERE.

Love the story but how about finding an ending. AAAAAA++++