All Comments on 'Charlie Comes Home Pt. 01'

by Str4ng3rth4nf1ct1on

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Johnk154Johnk1547 months ago

Stopped reading at "huge cocked son"

banyadeewana1501banyadeewana15017 months ago

I liked it. Not a fan of the amputee stuff, but this was a unique read. Hoping to read more parts. Maybe she needs to be forced to drink his piss....

muskyboymuskyboy7 months ago

So bad. This is a fetish story, at best.

NoOneCanNoNoOneCanNo7 months ago

Disgusting. Nasty. Deviant. Please continue the story!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Interesting, improbable but not totally. It will become more interesting when Charlie talks her into servicing all of his needs and she discovers the many benefits of "care giving".

redlion75redlion757 months ago

If someone is that far gone with anger and violence he wouldn't be allowed to go home with her alone.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Enjoyed it. Any plans for a follow up?

Str4ng3rth4nf1ct1onStr4ng3rth4nf1ct1on6 months agoAuthor

@annoymous.

Yes am currently in the process of writing the next part.

idctwelveidctwelve5 months ago

very nicely written, strength - i especially like seeing her get slowly consumed by her lust. looking forward to the next installation (:

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Glad to see another chapter is on the way!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

You have quite an imagination. Sick, perverted but imaginative. Just wondering why this poor kid needed an 11" cock to meet your standards. I gave this sick story a 2 and that was generous. Don't bother with a followup.

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