All Comments on 'Charlottesville High School Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Good Job Mary

Another fine job. Not likely but a fun read. Hopefully the next chapter is soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Very Likey

oh yes this could very likely happen. absolutely love that last line by ms. Bettis. Endless chapters of trains on ms bettis. football team, basketball, girls volley ball.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Disgusting

This was rape. This is not okay.

DragosLoveDragosLoveabout 8 years ago
Really should be in non-con/rape

But it was well written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Rape???

This is literotica and, therefore, fantasy. You can move on if you don't like it. Period!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Interesting

Interesting reading as Im an alumni of Charlottesville High School.

roveroneroveronealmost 8 years ago
Wrong category...

ehh...

TSreaderTSreaderover 7 years ago
So very yummy!

I love it! Very good indeed! Thank you!

wibitriwibitriover 7 years ago
Wow!

Good story...

dmbdriver1dmbdriver1about 7 years ago
I think all boys wanted one or more teachers over the years

I enjoyed your story but its to bad they had to blackmail her into having sex with them. I still have the rest to read so we will see where you go with them

Funewriter1Funewriter1about 7 years ago
Ahhh... The Advantages Of A Public Education

I'd still be in high school if I had a teacher like Ms. Bettis, and my sister and I could double-team her.

KingCuddleKingCuddlealmost 6 years ago
I don't like conniving, vile people.

I life...or in stories.

TrollTureTrollTurealmost 5 years ago
Not bad

This story badly needs some editing. There a lots and lots of spelling mistakes here.

While I share the sentiments of the previous poster, I don't mind a little bit of blackmail in my sex-stories! :) This story shows promise, and I will continue to read the other chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
In another school . . .

I went to another school in Charlottesville a long time ago and I had a math teacher (calculus) who really knew her subject matter, but was a lousy teacher. She was very much as you described “Ms. Berttis”. Ours was her first class of the day, at 11:00 in the morning. She would often come in late with her hair a mess and hickies on her neck! We would speculate some wild fraternity party at UVA. Could our math teacher be the same as your math teacher?!!🤔

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

So sucking fucking hot. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc’s UK.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Ugh. I don't like this kind of coercion in my erotica. But you writing is SO good that I have to keep reading the series...

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