by handyrandy9
This is close to the fantasy that I have for my life. My wife is fun, both sexually and just in life, but is a little vanilla. This is giving me ideas for expanding her and my sexual horizons. Thank you. Keep writing. I can't wait for the next installment--I hope I don't have to wait too long. The wait would be more fun if I was in chastity, but you know, vanilla wife.
Great! Incouldn't wait for the follow up of previous episodes, pelade continue!!
I'm not a big fan of SPH but the loving connection with these two makes it fit. Amazing writing! Great series! 5 on all chapters
Let me start by saying that this series is HOT. I generally can't stand to read SPH but you are doing a pretty good job with it. That said here comes my criticism.
I usually find that the stories i like most on this site have character development. In order for a reader to appreciate a character they have to empathize with the character somewhat. The edging and chastity are very hot and well done. But enough is enough. I no longer empathize with this guy and I've become disgusted with him. I understand that some of the attraction of this fetish is precisely what I'm bringing up which may be why I don't read a lot in this genre. At the point she took him too far and he had to be coached into the lifestyle by his mentor, that's when I would have allowed him to orgasam with his wife. That would've been a stretch fetish. This has turned into nothing but punishment to him. Remember BSDM brings pleasure to both parties.
My review of the story all parts can be summed up in two words: write more. Write more. Write more. And please write more.
I LOVE that she asked how looser her pussy felt - on his tongue... and didn't even let him feel it on his dick. She should make this a habit. His pent up cum needs to stay trapped and unreleased and she needs to get as stretched out and used as possible