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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Nice, needs improvement

Bad News: The first few paragraphs were labored and need editing. Good news: Love the plot, characters and pacing...

FA_JFFA_JFalmost 11 years ago
Enjoyed it

Such choices get made regularly in this sad world.

Complete as is, but would love a longer telling of the story.

SugarShark_13SugarShark_13over 2 years ago

I'm glad Chaz aka Frank didn't go thru with the assignation of Julio. It sad that such methods of operation are still in play even today.

I do wish that the story was longer, but it was a excellent story none the less.

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