All Comments on 'Checked Out At The Library'

thanks so much im a library girl...love that story

Hey Tabber,

You are one fantastic storyteller. This hot little story was extremely erotic. Lisa is a bona fide, card-carrying tease. I loved each and every scene, but especially the one in the head librarian's office with Lisa leaning over the desk getting it from behind. I am eager to read more of your work. Please hurry with an encore performance.

It's too bad you wrote it in the 1st person, present tense. Would have been FAR better in PAST TENSE. Save the present tense for news reporting on TV.

Great story -- having worked in a library I can really relate to this.

Very well written story, with enough sex to be exciting and just enough background to make the story interesting.

hey tabber.. excellent story..

a terrific job of describing lisa's body.. too good