All Comments on 'Cheerleader Spoils'

I have now read several of your stories, and apart from some minor spelling and grammatical errors they are perfect. Other people obsess over minor errors, I feel as long as it is a well conceived story that is what matters. Look forward to reading more of your work.

You sure are prolific. Not good. But you sure spew out the trash.

Except for the slightest error here and there, you have a very well done writing, personally I believe. it requires a sequel and start of a series.

Well done.

I enjoyed the story. Personally, I would have liked a little oral sex as well, but that's a matter of personal taste. The only thing I will say is that I believe you should lose the word "ravish". I don't believe I've ever actually heard someone really use it.

Almost felt asleep.

You sound like a broken record or a parrot. gave this a 5 for your effort and because you made dear annony cry.