All Comments on 'Chemistry of Love'

by YDB95

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dombledoredombledoreabout 7 years ago
Sweet like candy

Your story is super cute. It's not often I get sucked in just for the story. Nice work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Loved the ending.

cantfightfatecantfightfateabout 7 years ago
Sweet

but too much like high school for my tastes.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Played Like a Movie!

I was here looking for a quick story. Found this after abandoning two others and couldn't stop reading till the end! Loved it, especially the twists and turns and the various storylines going on at the same time that all connect to each other!

Imagined my own campus throughout the story :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
If only

If only I'd read your story during voting time, I'd have worked to get you First Place in the contest. Well written; grammar, spelling, and punctuation miles above most stories; and a story much beyond others set at a college. Bravo!

TSreaderTSreaderabout 7 years ago
A beautiful story!

An amazing story all the way from beginning to end! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Lovely story

I love how the naughty guy gets his comeuppance in this romantic sexy story. :P

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
great story

Kept me reading into the wee hours. Terrific story and characters.

DoctimeDoctimealmost 7 years ago
One big boo boo

Great story and a well deserved award. There was however one big boo boo on lit page 7. When Jen was talking to her equestrian club, you called her Kathy instead of Jen. I just wanted to call it to your attention so you could correct it if possible. I did enjoy your story a great deal. Doctime

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Damn, that was great!

This was totally great. I loved the story, the characters were well realized, and it was really sweet and genuine. I wish I could give it a sixth star.

KingCuddleKingCuddleover 3 years ago
Seemed more like a high school story.

Trivial.

But I did see it through! :+))

usnretireeusnretireeover 3 years ago

Beautiful story with the blossoming love surviving the evil wiles of the bad guy. Well written with believable characters and emotions. Had to finish without interuption to see happy ending. :))

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
name typo

Jen nodded and smiled. "I guess you're right, Jen

Kathy nodded and smiled. "I guess you're right, Jen

HM8485HM8485almost 3 years ago

Nicely written story about a complicated set of related incidents in a small group of people. So good I read it twice the same day as I got interrupted, and just started over again. Quite some experience for two introverted people, with some hot sex blended in expertly. I really enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Brilliant! Very cleverly put together. Had me laughing many times.

OpenWordsOpenWordsover 1 year ago

She's supposed to be intelligent, but she jumped to the stupidest conclusion? And then found him guilty? That's one shitty person and NOT a good prospect for future security!

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