by YDB95
Your story is super cute. It's not often I get sucked in just for the story. Nice work.
I was here looking for a quick story. Found this after abandoning two others and couldn't stop reading till the end! Loved it, especially the twists and turns and the various storylines going on at the same time that all connect to each other!
Imagined my own campus throughout the story :)
If only I'd read your story during voting time, I'd have worked to get you First Place in the contest. Well written; grammar, spelling, and punctuation miles above most stories; and a story much beyond others set at a college. Bravo!
An amazing story all the way from beginning to end! Thank you!
I love how the naughty guy gets his comeuppance in this romantic sexy story. :P
Kept me reading into the wee hours. Terrific story and characters.
Great story and a well deserved award. There was however one big boo boo on lit page 7. When Jen was talking to her equestrian club, you called her Kathy instead of Jen. I just wanted to call it to your attention so you could correct it if possible. I did enjoy your story a great deal. Doctime
This was totally great. I loved the story, the characters were well realized, and it was really sweet and genuine. I wish I could give it a sixth star.
Trivial.
But I did see it through! :+))
Beautiful story with the blossoming love surviving the evil wiles of the bad guy. Well written with believable characters and emotions. Had to finish without interuption to see happy ending. :))
Jen nodded and smiled. "I guess you're right, Jen
Kathy nodded and smiled. "I guess you're right, Jen
Nicely written story about a complicated set of related incidents in a small group of people. So good I read it twice the same day as I got interrupted, and just started over again. Quite some experience for two introverted people, with some hot sex blended in expertly. I really enjoyed it.
She's supposed to be intelligent, but she jumped to the stupidest conclusion? And then found him guilty? That's one shitty person and NOT a good prospect for future security!