All Comments on 'Cherished Girl Ch. 02'

I'm all about an HEA but it has to be believable. The fact that she's even contemplating "loving" him is ridiculous. It's just not doing it for me.

I really hope to read the end of this story. And I do hope she can learn to love him and that he can truly learn to love and respect her. I am all for second and yes even third chances.

The extremely challenging task of semi non con dialogue war and mind games superbly achieved here!! :))any ice between them seems to be thawing..after much sex slaving by erotic captive Carissa..and much seductive and brainy verbal coaxing of Anders, by her!! ;))

End of the series seems to appear hazily and lazily above the horizon....!! ;)) gK...your Frenchman Anders, indeed very handsome and a deliciously passionate and intense lover!! ;))beautiful gray blue eyes...;))He also seems so lost in an intensively sad insecurity,over losing Carissa!!....hope some happy arrangement works out in the end which would be to both of their pleasure..and none's displeasure!!;))

Would really love to read the conclusion of this story......

Almost did not read second chapter. Glad I did, and I'm waiting to see how this ends between the unique couple. Absorbing story.

wow

5 stars

this is your best work most serious most detailed and most realistic

a tug of war btw love and fear ,trust vs betrayal/possessiveness/jealousy

all the beautiful and dark parts of human emotions

sex in the story was hot but when you load them with emotions like love and possessivess it becomes lava

kudos gaggedkitty