by August_Bouvier
i love this start... well written. I'm looking forward for more...
So glad this new story is finally here. This is a great start; you've got such a good writing style. Can't wait until you post more of it.
And wonderful to see this here at last. Can't wait to see the next part!
I read the other series first and was def blown away!!!! And this first chp is just wonderful. I can't wait for chp. 2
It's only chapter 1 & my heart is already bleeding for this character. Can't wait to follow her story wherever it may lead
Oh my, what a beautifully written, well constructed story. I'm so hooked on what Sascha plans on doing for happiness, and how Alex and Noah will play into this. I love your writing style...very unique and emotional. Thanks for posting and I can't wait for chapter 2!!
--Soular
...I have been waiting seems like forever(oh yes)for your return!!!
Sacha has been the one to fight for the love of Alex & Sacha. Hopefully after she moves on with Noah, Alex will be the one to fight for the love that is Alex and Sacha.
Of course, I'm just guessing, but whatever the story, I'm sure it will be great, you are August_Bouvier after all!!
It's total heartbreak when you love someone and you try so hard to make it work love but they're closed off. You can tell Alex loves her but knows it can't work. As much as he broke Sascha's heart he did her a favor. I'm curious to find out if Noah's going to be the one she ends up with and if Alex is going to create problems. It's great to see different writers coming into the interracial genre and giving us variety. I agree with Soular and the others I like your style and this is a wonderful start. Keep going.
August, you have no idea how many times I check back to see if you post a new story! I was so addicted to Sean and Ana I read it over and over again multiple times. Am I ever so glad to see you post a new story! And what a great start! Please don't keep us waiting long. Keep up the good work. What a great writer you are. Magnificent. Just magnificent.
August I'm SO glad you're back! I've read Sean and Ana's story so many times and I am SO glad to see that you've started a new story! I can't wait to read more! YAY!
I am so glad to see you writing again! You write so beautifully and I must admit, after having read the first chapter I have no idea where this story is headed- back to the ex, forward to the neighbor, or perhaps towards someone else? Wherever it goes, I cannot wait to read more of Sacha's story. Thanks for writing! X
I cant believe how beautifully written this first chapter is. The emotions just seeped through and I was left in utter admiration of your writing. I cant wait to continue reading the rest of the series.
My girl Lauryn Hill said it best in the Ex factor this chapter in a nutshell. Great writing!