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by KeithD

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

I like it. Powerful, intense and erotic.

driese191919driese191919about 1 month ago

Well written without all the overused cliches. The story drew me in immediately: I loved the scene of the son in bed listening to the sounds of his father getting fucked. The gang rape toward the end would have benefited from more description, but that is only a minor quibble. Ending the story with the father jerking off watching his son getting fucked was just right with a tantalizing hint that he would be the next one to enjoy his son’s ass. Excellent. I came twice and now have to clean up the area.

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For the information of the GM reader, KeithD is the new account name for stories (many of which are published to the marketplace under the names habu and Dirk Hessian) that were previously posted to Literotica under the name sr71plt. The sr71plt account had a goal of 1,001 pos...