All Comments on 'China Doll'

Wonderful, BELIEVABLE storyline.

Great happy ending with lots of steamy reading in between..

I await more stories from this author

You did such a good job with the characters. Built them marvelously.

And the sex was very hot.

Well done.

I read this story twice. It was just that good!!

Mei Lin's a Chinese name, hence Chinadoll. Why Tokyo then? Or is she a Chinese girl stationed in Tokyo?

Great story! However I would have like to read about the sex between the two main people in a little more detail. A couple of their dates spelled out. My imagination was coming up with some pretty hot sex. I realize that is what the story is suppose too do. There again it is a great story. Keep writting, maybe a chapter 2.

?? Mei Lin is phonetically a Chinese name.

I have not heard of a Japanese name that sounds like Mei Lin.

You should have based the corp. office in Taipei, Taiwan instead of Tokyo

The story was very well written. The characters work and the plot develops nicely.

My only issue was the opening scene, which was completely believable until we found out the truth about "Mei Lin". Once she was ... exposed, the "Why other women no like me?" bit just didn't make sense.

Thanks for a great story!

John

It is a great story, too bad you let both the investigative and sexual tension fade after he requested a different secretary. I like longer stories too. I wonder why you only posted one story.

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This was a pretty good story. I just wish there was a little more to it. You know, like what happened "after" Jack moved to Tokyo.

But as the previous commenter said, it had a weak ending. Should have been more about Jack going to Tokyo and re-connecting with his former secretary / corporate spy / lover. I mean, ain’t that the Romance part? I’d still give the story 5 stars, though.

Okay, the story was good and you have ended it in such a way you can do a sequel now...