by Wulfwinter
browjob, haha. Good story man, hit the science library description right on the proverbial nail. I'll give you a 100 if you continue this in a series format... get the other hottie involved too.
Not bad as far as the description, the plotting, etc., but the racist attitude and tone was a turn-off. "Smartest kid in their rice farming village" -- ugggh.
Seriously, whole "brow job" and racist comments just.. really took me out of everything. It was just painful.
Loved the story. For everyone who comments on the racist comments...a story that's in first person doesn't always have a character that represents the writer...and some people are damn racists.
...and I'm a tree huggin' Obama supporter. Face facts; its a stroke story PEOPLE, not social commentary. Your reading Literotica reluctanance/non consent and your shocked that the rapist is a racist?!? No wonder some think that camping out and banging on drums will change big money's influence on goverment. Dawin was right we're just talking monkeys.
Japaneses have trouble with the L sound, not Chinese.
i mean, how common is the name Lee (Bruce Lee) and Li (Jet Li) in China?
Would have been better without all the racism. We get it, you want to fuck a stereotype and wish you had been in Nam.
Moon, i don't mean to excuse racism, but within the story, the character resents rich students and especially rich foreign students, and he takes his revenge on one of them.
there's something satisfying about a good revenge story, after all, and the girl in the story is an arrogant little bitch.
on the other hand, i would've told the story differently, would've had the guy make her spend the whole weekend at his place, and really go to town both sexually and in terms of humiliating her, too..
and then have her say what she says at the end.
lol racist
Would like to see more of this character maybe debasing other Asians in the library