All Comments on 'Chloe and Allen Ch. 01'

Keep Going ! ! !

I really enjoyed the slow easy build to this story. Please continue the slow burn as you continue the story. A GREAT read...

Don't stop! Please write more of this story. I am so turned on and wet right now! I will read this again when I can play with my pussy!

this was really good i hope you write more

Thanks for the great feedback so far! And don't worry; I'm currently writing chapter 6, and it won't end there. There is definitely more to come!

Great story. Hopefully more to come....

Love the build up and realism!!!!

Please continue

I loved this! it's so much better than those that just go straight in for the sex right away!

I like it. I like the creativity. I like the writing from both points of view. I thank you for the time you took to create this work. I look forward to the next chapter. I was expecting a bit more of character development. More words explaining her looks, her activities outside of her relationship with her father. More words explaining what kind of man her father is outside of the relationship with his daughter. What kind of interactions he has with his son. Same for his wife. I just like long boring reads made interesting with character development. I like the details in your writing and I know that you would do a good job of 'painting a picture' with details in the areas that I mentioned above. So overall? Well done and well written. Peace.

"Chloe and Allen Ch. 01:" - Eighteen Year Old Virgin Daughter, Chloe and Her Married Mid-forties Aged Father, Allen.

This story has a life that is so unusually exotic, teasing and manipulative that Daughter Chloe feels as though she needs "research" in order to judge, detail and measure her feminine charm's on her father libido and sexual effects. I was so engrossed by the writing of the story and the effects that Chloe was subjecting her father, that I was considering the technical aspects of Chloe's "research" that I lost awareness to the sexual content of Chloe's actions to her father's sexual excitement of his Baby Girl.

I'm really struck by the writer's ('NeBaPrivate') great writing style and story theme. The characterization of both Chloe and her father throughout is remarkable and phenomenal...exemplary in fact.

stunned I try really hard n do avoid family taboo but broke n started 2 read cos referred by nikki2021 was so sad to see only 3 pages once got 2 end pg1 continued reading wishing more chapters totally reeled in I see there is a ch2 n series info links so grateful

Thrilled by the indulged pace time spent on description even now my pulse is racing Thank you so much 4 your diligent effort

Just read 2nd pg of the comments saw your comment having finished ch6 n promise of more delighted best wishes 4 you