All Comments on 'Chocolate and Gold Ch. 04'

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BOSTONFICTIONWRITERBOSTONFICTIONWRITERabout 14 years ago
So far so good

Looking forward to the next installment.

bruce22bruce22about 14 years ago
Good Story

If you want a cheery, feel good moment.... All the tension is off-stage.

If there is any!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
7ef5

on all chapters makes me suspicion the author is padding ratings

maybe worthy of 2 stars,,,but come on;;;;5 stars.

oh well look at what is voted into the guvment every other year.

KarenEKarenEover 9 years ago
Vannie

Why not bring her out for the weekend?

KarenEKarenEabout 9 years ago
Re-Reading

First, repeating my earlier comment about bringing Vannie out for a visit.

Second, unless he decides to get involved in the day-to-day operation of the business, once the immediate crisis is over he get go anywhere, just coming back for occasional meetings.

Third, if he does decide he needs/wants to stay in San Francisco, Vannie's job is portable, since it is pretty much all travel anyway, and if her mother doesn't want to re-locate they can easily afford frequent trips back and forth.

TonyKiwiTonyKiwiover 5 years ago
I find

it hard to believe that in a male dominated private company that the son would not have been forced to study business and knows nothing about the company so I will have to suspend belief in reality to finish this story, I hate not finishing a story. TK

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