All Comments on 'Chocolate and Gold Ch. 07'

The story is basically interesting and as always the technical aspects are well done. Perhaps Coaster has worked in a great variety of industries or he is good at finding background information on the Web.

The only real problem is that it is all pleasant and linear. A few black clouds and even a reversal or two would create more tension and with it attention.

Almost to the end, hoping there are no unpleasant surprises!