All Comments on 'Chocolate Dipped'

Good really story, has good prospects and would like to read more.

We know where she will spend her free time

But then the sex happened. Too fast. Much to fast.

For me, at least, slow, step-by-step progression it what's erotic not wham-bam-thank-you-ma'am,

Cannot wait to read more.

we need more

Nice, lively, well-written story. The descriptions were vivid, the racial references were cute, and the sex, while quick, was hot.

Then, you had to bring out a disgusting condom. This is fantasy, free from worries of unwanted pregnancy, where we can go ahead and imagine giving the pretty black girl a "chocolate creampie."

Four stars.

-EbnyLvrBryan, via mobile phone.

Yet another unfinished story, do you get bored with your own stories? 1*

It is so refreshing to read about an African/American woman with small/medium breasts. I am tired of reading tales about women with "Dolly Parton" breasts. Thanks. PS: As for ANON - finish it in your Imagination (if you have one). It ended just the way it should.

Great fun story. Thanks.