All Comments on 'Chocolate for Father's Day'

by johnwadd

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spoiler22mspoiler22mover 6 years ago
3 stars

I gave it 3 stars simply because there was no actual incest in the story. Hell, I would have given it 4 stars of you just, at the end, alluded to sexual contact between dad and daughter. Or that maybe she didn't tell the whole story. Also, I liked the story but it was hard to get into considering she was telling this story to some sort of council, who goes into that much detail in a situation like that? And how did they find out? It wok have been bette if you left them out and just let Jess reel the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
WHAT A FUCKED UP STORY

About fucked up people.

It was great.

5 stars.

Paul in Oklahoma

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