All Comments on 'Choices'

and reading shit like this ....qualifies as huge waste of time

I know you should not insult someone for attempting something new but really do you call this writing please go back to reading this is horrible.

The story line is OK but could be developed a bit better. Proofreading is a must!! Many mistakes- lights eliminated ?? to see the river. etc. etc.

both for errors and content - story did not flow well.

Spell-check will not catch correctly spelled words used incorrectly - ask an editor to proofread your work. Keep trying, but edit before submitting.

but actually a very erotic storyline.

I would like to read another chapter on what happens next.

Thanks for the read

love all your stories...keep writing

You wrote your story the way you wanted to. Take no notice, it was good, if the others don't like the way you spell and write, well bad luck, go and read something else. Good on you.