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All Comments on 'Choices Pt. 01'

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DunkirkDunkirkabout 5 years ago

Dad needs to fill Emily's pussy with his seed and start another family. Sarah may even join in the fun

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
I wish

you would decide if it is to be 'first person' i.e. 'I' or 'third person' , i.e. 'Sarah' or 'Emily'!

Example. To start with it seems that the story is from the point of view of 'Sarah' but then "... and after dinner, Sarah went to study with a friend on a course that Emily wasn't taking."

Shouldn't that have been "... and after dinner, I went to study with a friend on a course that Emily wasn't taking."?

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayalmost 5 years ago
where's

the incest? a blowjob that's it? nothing for her?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
A very realistic start ...

You have set the scene well for various story directions, some obvious and others to surprise us readers. Please keep developing slowly with intimate details.

HornyViginAngelHornyViginAngelalmost 5 years ago
When does the daughter get it. She needs to be the first.

He needs the daughter more.

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