All Comments on 'Christian Loving Ch. 01'

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R M RoxingerR M Roxingerover 20 years ago
Impregnating the stepmom

I found your series interesting, not only because a young man makes his stepmom pregnant, but also for the Biblical parallels in your characters' names & r'ships to each other.

don87654don87654over 14 years ago
There are some promises in this one....

I am anxious to see what happens in this story.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Question

Isn't there something in the Bible about not lying with your father's wife?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Wow

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Rachel needs a Reuben sandwich.

Rachel thought about Noah and his family after the great flood. They alone began the long task of repopulating the planet. Maybe her son would be the answer to her dilemma.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You should make her pregnant with twins and do the whole story over to make it like the Noah movie or even the Bruce almighty movie or the Evan almighty movie that way it sort of ties in biblical

RanDog025RanDog025about 1 year ago

Dude, you need an editor.

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Disturbingly mellow. It has been over a decade since I last participated on the Lit scene. Over two decades since I joined. Yet, after all this time, I have returned. Stories still abound in my head. I've got one ready for proofreading. A bunch of others that need to be ...

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