All Comments on 'Christmas Journey'

by oggbashan

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
wonderful story

I know those roads well, well told story I enjoyed it greatly

Socially_IneptSocially_Ineptover 12 years ago
Great story, but...

I really liked this story. Very entertaining. However, I don't think 'Romance' is the proper category for this. I think 'Humor & Satire' or 'Non-Erotic' might have been more suitable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Brilliant

really enjoyed it

Chiara23Chiara23over 12 years ago
Wonderful!

What a heartwarming tale of pay it forward! Not so much a romance but still very well written with real and natural flow and style.

*****

fanfarefanfareover 10 years ago
pity

that the fickled Finger of fate, writ and moved on......

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
You should re-write this as a screen play

Make a fun movie.

SpencerfictionSpencerfictionover 9 years ago
Road trip

Marvellous heartwarming story. Thank you, I so enjoyed reading this.

J_RReaderJ_RReaderover 8 years ago
Christmas spirt

A lovelly story about a young man that helps almost everybody except himself, but in true christmas spirt he gets his reward in the end.

After "Fairy ring" this is your second story to impress me.

Keep up the good work.

firemanlitfiremanlitover 6 years ago

A bit trite in places. But I had only read a few paragraphs when I got a smile started and had a smile all the way. Cute story, nice not to read a story where someone is cheated or screwed over.

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
Delightful

Some writers try to mask where they live, not Oggbashan, he embraces it. He freely pours the tea, serves scones and biscuits, while guiding around the countryside as if we all lived there. It all adds to and enhances the charm. I just wish there were more stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
DIFFERENT

ENJOYABLE READ

jtaylor

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Loved it!

Sweet, fun, entertaining and easy read. Lovely!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
One of my favourite Oggbashan stories!

It's one of my favs ... give a lot, get a lot!

Heart warming that he helped so many people, and so many people helped him.

Life doesn't seem so much like that these days ... sigh.

Antryg_WindroseAntryg_Windroseover 3 years ago
Fine!

A splendid tale and I'm so glad I wasn't there. An Australian summer Xmas story of a desert trek would be a nice counterpoint.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

cool

SequoiaSempervirensSequoiaSempervirensalmost 3 years ago

5* — I often come back to read this story. It’s one of my all-time favorites. Very heartwarming.

stewartbstewartbalmost 3 years ago

It's great when you pass thru your life ... if you can pass it foreword to others.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

His journey home ended up being a great adventure. What a fun read.

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Can I now change bio? oggbashan was diagnosed as terminally ill and expected to be dead by June 2018. As you can see. I am still here. . As long as I can I will continue writing and posting on Literotica but there will be an end - soon. I don't expect anyone to like ALL of my...

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