All Comments on 'Christmas on a Stick'

This was really cute! Good job.

Made this straight guy nearly blow a load.

It was nice to read a story where the two characters actually like each other and aren't trying to humiliate/dominate/hurt each other. This was actually erotica and not just another porn without plot. Th anks

So cute, hot, nice and hot, nice, cute and nice, cute hot, and hmmmmmmmmmm, what do I want for Christams? Which direction is that sleigh travelling in? Does he take passengers? No? Well I'm just going to lie back under the Christmas tree, read this story again, and tell Santa I'm coming anyway.

Ho Ho

"less is more", I think you painted a vivid picture using a bare minimum of words.