All Comments on 'Christmas Wish Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Lack of creativity,proper spelling and well thought out characters.

Man this fucking sucked.Absolutely unbelievable.I was going to try and be constructive but I don't know where to start. This story and it's predecessor are horrible.

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