All Comments on 'Chronicles of Chris Ch. 01'

Great story. Keep it up!

It was very good the first read I was allowed, and now it is even better. Damn, I am jealous of fictional Chris now...heh

I look forward to the journey you have started, bravo.

Val

Very much enjoyed your story. Was perfectly written, in the essence of making it seem that the reader was in fact Chris and the build up was exquisite. Can't wait for the continuation of this story. Hopefully he is lucky enough to eventually get back together with Eva.

Fantastic build-up with a bittersweet finish, but hope for the future. Just great. Hope you continue the series.

One of the best I've read on Lit. Well developed characters and the journey was as exciting as the sex was hot. You've a great gift for this.

I was going to ask for Joni but when I scrolled down here, there she is. You rock.