All Comments on 'Chuck's Fantasy Ch. 02'

But I hope this tale can come to a relatively early conclusion without having to recount every drop of cum she swallowed and he licked out of her (I know, you have already submitted all or most of the story). The tension created in the introduction is most interesting part of the plot so far.

Thanks for all the entertainment you have created.

I'm not even going to try anymore....

C

and I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm sure it will destroy the marriage and maybe that's what other guys need to read so they won't fuck up theirs. Keep it going Bob I liked it.

I loved this story. as for the next parts, please don't rush it. Keep up the sexual tension.

JPB has outdone himself on this one!

keep the story going, love it so far. this is the type of story a husband could show his wife if he has the fantasy of seeing her with someone else, especially a black guy.

Well, the genie is out of the bottle! Chuck should have been more careful on what he wished for because Loretta has become obsessed with having another man. Sure hope Chuck gets his jollies because Loretta sure is getting hers. Not only is she trying to please chuck she is satisfying a "hidden" desire of hers. Now she is finding out what she missed by getting married young.

Looking forward to Chapt #3

This is a very tired story line- JPB. Have some courage and not recycle this stuff. Get creative and develop some non-wimp stories for once. This current story is a pile of dog shit.

if it was a white guy, i could believe this, but she has already talking bout fucking a nigger, if she thought of him as that, she wouldnt have sex with him

JPB, Great story so far. I was sooooo frustrated when the chapter ended! It was great. ;-> Now I'm just going to sit back, stroke and read the first two chapters again.

Great characters and great plotting. This is much more intuiging than the male perspective.

excited while asking their pretend wife to fuck the whole neighborhood of black cocks while watching and videoing the cocks.

Oh - and jacking off while she thinks what an asshole for a man I once cared for as now he is just a selfish wimp without respect for himself or his wife - byya wimpo as soon as another pimp that can be respected is found.

A self cuckolding demented male is a humiliation addicted helpless wimp in glory until the dawn and the mirrors that don't lie.

So bobie - this being a cuckster predilection of yours really excites you eh.

Which means you fail as writing as a woman and leave the reader with a rather weak as water female as shallow as a male. Stick to what you have had practice at in being male.

that it isn't a guy who is telling this story but the story is so damned hot simply the best !

How silly. Not even horses are 12". 1*

Bob in the gutter again. He's done worse, but not much.

That was quite disturbing