All Comments on 'Cinder Girl Ch. 02'

please finish

Can't wait to read more!

I will be interested to see how much of a challenge she faces and how she responds to the challenge.

A really nice chapter :) It would be awesome if the prince gave the money to her and not her stemother.

The stepsisters (and mother) need to get fucked big time.

Looking forward to the next chapter! Well written!

I like the way you are not rushing it and taking your time with the story..bags of description and great anticipation....next chapter soon please,,,,

can't wait to see how it develops. Your writing is excellent. : )

If the guard truly had the morals he claimed, he would not have been working for the cockrot in the first place. But that aside - you write a good story, I am angry enough to commit murder, and this is the second time I'm reading this story.

Evebroughtanaxthistime

How will she save herself and get justice? Guess we will see if she does.