All Comments on 'Cities of Power Ch. 04'

So glad to see a new chapter of this story. Please say it won't take as long for the next one.

I loved this chapter as I do your other stories but its hard waiting for them. Hopefully we don't have to wait so long for another chapter along with some of your other stories

Where is the rest of this story?

Will there be more

It has been two years, are you going to finish this story?

More! I can't stand not knowing what happens. You are truly talented abd have a great gift for story telling.

This story is next on my ist to finish after I have completed the one I am currently working on.

Thank you for noticing that you left a cliff hanger to a wonderfully written story. I will await with the anticipation of a horny restrained submissive for the next touch.

When can we expect more? I want to know how this ends. Fantastic story so far.

This was wonderful love all your stories. Are you going to be adding more to this if so when do you think?

It has been almost three years since I added a chapter to this. I have looked at it several times over the last two years and I have been able to get back into this headspace. That does not mean I won't be able to just that at present, I am concentrating on other series. My apologies. I know I have several open series and plan to either remove them or finish them eventually.

I have just discovered this series and was sad when I realised it was not going to be finished. But, I am very happy to see that you are trying to add to the story. It needs finishing because it is just so good. :) Looking forwards to new chapters.

Thanks

I know from your Facebook posts you may return to this story later, but I must say I hope you continue it.

Just one minor quibble - You write of Reiki healers giving massages, whereas Reiki is more of a static healing, with hands either placed lightly on a part of the body for a period of time, before possibly moving to another part, or held above the body, not even touching.

Admittedly the practice could have changed after the Great War, and massage from one who is also a Reiki healer does tend to benefit from the fact that they are a Reiki Healer, so it is only a minor quibble.

And a little child was born and have the burden carrying the weight of the world …. The religious always started wars with one consequence i will borrow this from a famous anti war song

Oh no-there's got to be a better way

Say it again

There's got to be a better way-yeah

What is it good for? (war)

War, I despise 'cause it means destruction of innocent lives

War, means tears to thousands of mothers how

When their sons go off to fight and lose their lives

I said, war, good god, now, what is it good for?

Absolutely, nothing

Say it again, war, what is it good for?

Absolutely, nothing, listen to me

War, it ain't nothing but a heart breaker

War, friend only to the undertaker, war

War, what is it good for?

Absolutely nothing

Say it, war, good god now, what is it good for?

Absolutely nothing, say it, (war)

Those just parts of it, but telling all ….. so back to your tale, thats a rollercoaster ride

Interesting tale and great written

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