All Comments on 'Claiming Treasure Ch. 26-30'

sigh i'm thinking it might be best if I stop posting theories about your stories. i'm starting to get a bit too accurate and don't want to ruin the story.

Good continuation of the storyline. Excellent writing and characters. All around a pleasure to read. I didn’t notice any grammar errors not that it is a huge deal to me since it hasn’t pulled me out of the enjoyment of the story. I just notice the grammar occasionally. Then I think I would have even worse errors if I was attempting to write a story.😜

Please do keep writing and I will reading.

Your current story is wonderful and may Luna shine upon your writing as you weave your magical words in the upcoming chapters.

Yay!! A happy end to this chapter! I'm thrilled for everyone and so glad Millner died and with Heather surviving the change and the babies too I can't help but wonder how Greg and his mate, Tatiana will take this news

Isn't it great when at least a few things go right?

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PN

Amazing work. I'm speechless.

At my first read-through I thought that at the end of Ch 27, Frank and Colletta were in Chicago having bought tickets, flown down and had a 'face to face' with Director Patterson. In the next scene they were at the Cascade Pack Clinic with no time having past? Did the agreement they got from Director Patterson happen on the on the phone and not in person and the tickets for a later date? Also when Vic fought Pipes, I was expecting Spider to ask for a rule addition of "no groin hits" to a round of laughter and possibly also "no eye gouges" when Thor announced "Two-minute rounds, no other rules.", or were those "understood" without needing to be mentioned?

but she and Frank said they needed to be there for Heather's change first.

I have to say, I love your storylines. They’re really engaging and I’m always excited to see new segments come out.

can't wait for the next chapter to see how heatherreacts to being turned

Last instalment - I should have written Carson, not Carlson. Amazed with change but don't know how I can handle all the issues surrounding them.

That chapter was pretty predictable

-jaye-

The survival of the twins was clever. Combining previously establised rules for how werewolves worked in an unexpected but logical way.