by partwolf
Oh, it’s all coming together now. Excellent chapter, I was ecstatic to see there was a new one up.
Wow what an action packed installment for this story.
I love the spy stuff, backstabbing council, reaction and the Motorcycle club involvement.
I would love to see more of the MC being involved...maybe even some turnings there if possible.
Maybe time to go public with the help of the president and HLS and other alphabet agencies.
Five stars from me
MC
I love this series so much! and you are an amazing writer
I love how your making a complex story by showing everything through
multiple POV and I especially love the line by Rori at the end.
the classic singal to war by Julius Caesar.
Another great story from my favourite were author. Amazing themes, plot and character development and so well written. I cannot wait till the next instalment.
Love your stories and look forward to each release.
A small note. On the first page, in Colletta's perspective, you mention Frank checking the plane for explosives. For a brief moment you switch to Frank's perspective with "I didn't scent anything, so I joined Colletta in the seats as the pilot closed the door and moved to the cockpit." and back to her perspective for the remainder of her section.
Minor issue, just wanted to let you know. That way, you can edit it in your final copy.
Keep up the great work.
:stinkeye: your really starting to enjoy these cliff hangers aren't you. eh ha
5 star on this one.
Frank had seen & smelled the earlier bomb , so he was acting as his own bomb sniffer , trained dogs are used everyday all over the world in this capacity .