by partwolf
Again, you created another great tale. it did seem to wrap up quickly, but then again, it was 65 Chapters long... Well done.. I can't wait for your next tail....
The ending was wonderful I have enjoyed this story and Your other stories as well. I hope this is not the last we see of your talent?????
I have enjoyed the trip. The characters, action, twists and turns kept the story moving and entertaining. I look forward to the next venture through your overactive imagination. Thanks for sharing your stories with us.
Wow. This was such a great story, I loved it ever since I started reading about Rori. Your settings and peoples’ reactions tend to be realistic (as much as possible for fantasy stories, at least) and your characters feel like people. Personally, I hope there’s more to Rori’s story, but, at the same time, I know that it has to end eventually. Of course, the end is my least favorite part, it’s so bittersweet, but necessary.
There are a couple of unanswered questions I have, though. Does Spider Monkey turn successfully? What happens with Jenny (I’m sure Rori would love it if someone from Arrowhead chose Jenny)? Does the president end up getting turned, and who chooses her? Some of these could maybe justify a short epilogue, though Jenny could star in a short spinoff series if you felt like it.
To sum everything up: I love your work, hope you keep writing for a long time to come, and thank you for all you have already written.
Wonderfully written. Engaging characters . I’ve enjoyed accompanying your characters on the journey.
Ending it with a Pack Thanksgiving was genius. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us.
As others have stated, I too love the way you develop characters and stories and I know wherever you take us next in your Multi-verse it will be wonderful. Thanks again for the ride and I look forward to your next adventure.
ELS
Wow sad to see this story end . Thank you it has been great love it very much. Can't wait to see your next story.
Thoroughly enjoyed the story (and all the rest of your output), but I'd really like to find out the results of Spider Monkey's pregnancy and possible conversion to werewolf.
This has been the most engaging series of all of the many that you have written. It is difficult to see it come to an end. Oh, and by the way, thank you for not ending it with an amateurish one paragraph wrap up. This chapter brought it to a smooth, happy end that left one content with all of the twists, turns and strife of the story, (ies) that led up to this point. Good job! Now get back to that keyboard and get busy.
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When Vic Bites Spidermonkey something dormant triggers and she shifts quickly into a Spidermonkey.
Loved the series 5's the whole way.
Are you ever going to reveal who betrayed Sean Ryder? I was hoping it would be in this series, or did I miss it?
Please tell me there'll be another sequel I'm mad I read all 3 of them in a week 😅
Did I miss something? What happened to Vic and Spider Monkey? Could there be more coming
This was a wonderful series... I loved all three stories!!! In fact, I love ALL of your stories!!! :-)
Enjoying it so far, was surprised not to find out if Spider Monkey was turned. Maybe in the next book.
First class story. 5 ⛤ throughout.
Two questions.
What happened to Vic and Spider monkey? They came back and she was helping on the computer security,metc but no further comment. Hope they come back in, I loved her.
Will the president get her wish to be turned? As a powerful individual it would probably have to be an alpha or someone of similar powerful position but who is left unmade?
Great story, I would love to hear what happened to all the rogues after the big reveal. Did they just hide it out? Did they get to join packs?
You also hav to wonder why none of the rogues who had limited reason for loyalty had ever exposed werewolves to humans.